{"id":19398,"date":"2024-10-02T09:36:07","date_gmt":"2024-10-02T09:36:07","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/twist-tales.com\/?p=19398"},"modified":"2025-02-27T14:40:38","modified_gmt":"2025-02-27T14:40:38","slug":"5-tips-on-writing-with-max-orkis","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/twist-tales.com\/de\/5-tips-on-writing-with-max-orkis\/","title":{"rendered":"5 Tips on Writing: With Max Orkis"},"content":{"rendered":"
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5 Tips on Writing: With Max Orkis<\/h1>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t
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I\u2019m a parent and a writer. My prose and poetry have appeared in print and online journals. My screenplays have won competitions and scored official selections, finalist placements, nominations, and honorable mentions in film festivals.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

For the past 10 years, I\u2019ve been writing for a living. Half this time I\u2019ve spent as a full-time narrative designer in mobile games and the other half as a writer and editor in tech. While lately I haven\u2019t been working in games as a staffer, I still pick up narrative design projects whenever I can, \u2018cause they\u2019re fun.<\/span><\/p>

Do I feel qualified to dispense writerly advice? Hell no.<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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Hooking Your Audience<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t
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How to hook your audience depends on the format and genre you\u2019re working in, but there might be a common denominator. I feel it\u2019s throwing your readers, viewers, or listeners into medias res, making them care, turning them into participants as early as possible.<\/span><\/p>

What does this vague definition mean in practical terms?<\/span><\/p>

For screenplays or, say, certain types of novel, I\u2019m a fan of the classical approach \u2014 giving your protagonist a goal and a need (ideally, mutually exclusive so as to create an internal conflict), force her to overcome obstacles on her journey toward the goal, and have her arc out of or deeper into her flaw as she progresses. But that\u2019s just me (kidding).<\/span><\/p>

The above is an Act 1- or pilot-level aim, though. What about engaging your audience in the initial moments of its interaction with your material?<\/span><\/p>

One way is to take advantage of the format\u2019s capabilities to tickle your audience\u2019s brains and senses and offer an immersive experience. For example, film is a visual medium (as are video games). It lends itself to audio-visual sequences, so you can give your viewers something spectacular, beautiful, heartbreaking, or funny to watch, for instance. Have these images and sounds set the scene and tone, reveal shit about the characters, walk your viewers through the story\u2019s world, and draw them in.<\/span><\/p>

What about formats like a casual mobile game or an abstract poem (I can\u2019t believe I just put the two in the same sentence either)?<\/span><\/p>

Well, even for a piece of text as basic as cut-scenes appearing in-between gameplay, a reductionist version of the type of character work I mentioned above can apply, too.<\/span><\/p>

Even if there is no dialogue, you can grab your players with the humor or charm of toponyms or NPC names.\u00a0As for poetry, even though it\u2019s rarely deliberate, you can hit your readers with a striking image echoed by the opening lines\u2019 phonology.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

When it comes to novels, opening lines seem particularly important. In this format, there are also some cool devices you can play with \u2014 for example, POV, interiority, language. Literary prose is much better equipped to handle interiority, for instance, than film, and in the latter medium, there\u2019s only one POV, whereas in a novel, you can have several. Simply put, each format comes with its own bag of tricks. Which of them you pick for your opening line depends on the story.<\/span><\/p>

I generally find myself thinking about opening lines pretty often. <\/span>What usually pops into my head is a character in The Plague<\/i> by Albert Camus. The former keeps revising the opening line of his novel for years and never writes the rest of it. I\u2019m not sure what the lesson is here, although it\u2019s probably staring me right in the face, which reminds me of the closing lines of <\/span>Burn After Reading<\/span><\/i>:<\/span><\/p>

GARDNER CHUBB: \u2026 What did we learn, Palmer.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

PALMER: I don\u2019t know, sir.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

GARDNER CHUBB: I don\u2019t fucking know either. I guess we learned not to do it again.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

PALMER: Yes sir.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

GARDNER CHUBB: I\u2019m fucked if I know what we did.<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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Mastering Plot Development<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t
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Plot should stem from character. By definition, a story is a hero overcoming obstacles to achieve a goal. So, first, give your character a goal, then put hurdles in her way. Those should become less and less surmountable as the stakes rise.<\/span><\/p>

Your protagonist\u2019s personality and flaws should also play a part in plot development. I.e. the flaws act as some of the most serious obstacles. They should inform her decisions and her emotional transformation. In other words, because of her flaws, the character should get in her own way, at least at first.<\/span><\/p>

Let\u2019s see, what other textbook stuff can I repeat here to make myself seem wise?\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

Dramatic structure! I\u2019m a big fan. Learning it has helped me immensely. As most will tell you, though, it\u2019s good to understand it and \u2014 more or less loosely \u2014 base your outline on whichever rendition of the beat sheet you prefer. Conversely, it might make your story feel stiff, stilted, and inorganic if you stick to the prescribed plot points religiously.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

Here\u2019s a great piece of advice I once heard in an interview and will now reproduce in my own words for your benefit. The only plot guideline is \u2014 each scene needs to necessitate the next.<\/span><\/p>

I riffed on that idea and outlined my latest feature-length script (the first I\u2019ve ever written on contract) thoroughly, yet loosely in terms of structure. I thought I\u2019d let the proverbial chips fall where they may while bearing the classical story beats in mind.<\/p>

And so I did. I felt like Neo, who\u2019s taken the red pill, relaxed into the matrix, and now just sees the code. Guess what \u2014 it seems to have worked. I\u2019m told the beats are where they\u2019re supposed to be, and the story flows naturally.<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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Effective World-Building Strategies<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t
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I believe alternate world-building should be purposeful as opposed to gratuitous. This especially concerns Sci-Fi, fantasy, speculative fiction, magical realism, horror, and paranormal. What I mean is \u2014 world-building shouldn\u2019t happen for its own sake. Instead, there should be story reasons for it. A reality unlike ours is usually justifiable if without it it\u2019s impossible to convey an idea, typically, the piece\u2019s message. In my opinion, a recent example of how to do it right is <\/span>Black Mirror.<\/span><\/i><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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I\u2019ve already talked quite a bit about character development in this spiel. I suppose I could add one thing I read somewhere and happen to agree with. Ultimately, your main characters, especially the protagonist and the antagonist (if there is one), are always exploring their own identities. The question they should seek to answer is, \u201cWho am I?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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Character choices should be motivated by their goals and needs, their personalities, and internal and external conflicts. An ideal type of choice is a dilemma. You want your complex and conflicted characters to be pulled in diametrically opposed directions.<\/span><\/p>

One issue with choices I came across while writing my latest script is predictability. As the screenplay is an adaptation of an existing published IP, I wasn\u2019t 100% free to structure the narrative (nor would I have shaped it any differently). I had to stay faithful to the source material. I couldn\u2019t make my protag\u2019s answer to his call to adventure surprising. The choice is binary, and he has to set out on his journey \u2014 otherwise, there\u2019s no story. So, my audience will be able to guess pretty easily which choice he’s going to make. What I learned is \u2014 how he arrives at that decision can also be interesting. Or so I hope.<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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What are your strengths in writing and narrative design?<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t
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I\u2019m told I can be funny. They also say I\u2019m pretty good at character work, at dialogue, and at prose, including action lines, especially when it comes to combat sequences.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>

However, I\u2019m convinced my major strengths are my desire to keep learning, my ability to listen to, sort through, and act on feedback, my discipline, and my love and respect for language.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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Which games or stories have you worked on?<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t
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Most of my published stories are in my portfolio. I\u2019ve also written some screenplays (none of them produced yet). Here are the games I\u2019ve worked on:<\/span><\/p>